tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3125309970895781884.post1828026680022467692..comments2024-03-28T02:16:14.922-05:00Comments on Vernon's Verses: The stroller that almost killed meMaganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14045036129073244749noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3125309970895781884.post-25532378392090301562011-03-01T23:26:18.685-06:002011-03-01T23:26:18.685-06:00I'd never make him take it back (unless it was...I'd never make him take it back (unless it was broken). Hey you got him in the store to begin with. Kudos to him for that. Most Dads freak out at the idea of going shopping. Mine was willing to unload and put together anything I bought as long as he didn't have to actually put a foot in the store.Lisa Richards/alterlisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00347858402988565314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3125309970895781884.post-83203683441045629262011-02-28T15:59:14.222-06:002011-02-28T15:59:14.222-06:00Kelsey- That's what I'm learning is that ...Kelsey- That's what I'm learning is that life is all about compromising--whether it is in writing or with a stroller. Would you rather that I say 'hi' or 'COO, COO, COO.' I hope he never reads how much I make fun of him in my blogs...<br /><br />Rachel- It's definitely good to see both sides of things, even if you don't agree. It's definitely helped in my writing and now I just have to apply it to life...or with strollers, lol.Maganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14045036129073244749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3125309970895781884.post-82339280738374722232011-02-28T15:29:48.512-06:002011-02-28T15:29:48.512-06:00I'm rewriting my beginning right now too, and ...I'm rewriting my beginning right now too, and I feel like you just wrote exactly what I went through last week, minus the baby stroller ;) Even if you don't agree 100% with the suggestions in a critique, it's great to have your problem areas highlighted so that you can go back and make changes in your own style.Rachel Searleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09413906883952940334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3125309970895781884.post-65265719233369977622011-02-28T07:23:38.753-06:002011-02-28T07:23:38.753-06:00Compromise is a good thing. I had to cut down the ...Compromise is a good thing. I had to cut down the number of pages for my manuscript, which was well worth the effort. I found that I like how much faster the story flows and it was more enjoyable to read. I know more changes are to come for my manuscript, but I can't wait to see how they improve the story line. <br />Say 'hi' to your husband for me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com